my 1st finished track dark tech house
Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:19 pm
sounds kinda like old progressive house to me... its aight i think
http://soundcloud.com/eatbrian/blast
http://soundcloud.com/eatbrian/blast
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Re: my 1st finished track dark tech house
Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:47 pm
Not bad , keep working it.
Re: my 1st finished track dark tech house
Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:59 pm
Not a huge fan of the 30 second slow intro.
I like the intro of the clap at 1:05
The flow from 1:30-1:45 needs a little work.
You can lose part of minutes 2-3:15. Repetitive and isn't evolving much. Also sounds too much like the first section, not enough variation.
Love the ramp up at 4:16, but it was a somewhat underwhelming delivery.
The last minute and a half seems to take forever.
Overall, not a bad start. Similar to some of my stuff I was producing last year. It needs to lose about 2 minutes IMO and the flow needs to be worked over a little, but the pieces are definitely there.
I like the intro of the clap at 1:05
The flow from 1:30-1:45 needs a little work.
You can lose part of minutes 2-3:15. Repetitive and isn't evolving much. Also sounds too much like the first section, not enough variation.
Love the ramp up at 4:16, but it was a somewhat underwhelming delivery.
The last minute and a half seems to take forever.
Overall, not a bad start. Similar to some of my stuff I was producing last year. It needs to lose about 2 minutes IMO and the flow needs to be worked over a little, but the pieces are definitely there.