First Ableton track - Progressive House Trance like..

[jandlerino]

My first track finished with ableton:

http://soundcloud.com/chdlr/step-2

Tell me what you think about it
Greetings from Vienna

[nbradford]

I like it... kinda not feelin the toms at the beginning... add some kind of effect like a tiny bit of reverb or something so they don't sound so cheap.
What 'instrument' did you use at 34 seconds in?

[tlennon]

Welcome Jan! Very nice fat rich analog sounding synths man. I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for sharing and look forward to hearing more. Nice job.

[jandlerino]

Thanks for your nice feedback!
@nbrad: Thx for your suggestion with the toms, I'm still working on them. The instrument at 34sec is the Operator (one sine and one saw summing).

[nbradford]

Thanks for your nice feedback!
@nbrad: Thx for your suggestion with the toms, I'm still working on them. The instrument at 34sec is the Operator (one sine and one saw summing).

You're welcome, be sure to repost when you get finished perfecting everything.

[Ed J]

I agree about the toms at the start. Try messing a little with the reverb on the tamborine-thing yin the background too, it's almost drowning

At 1:05 the piano is very high in the mix!

When everything kicks in the drums are a little low in the mix.

This track is really crying out for a nice big pumping sidechained bassline

Not bad at all for a first effort though, keep at it

[luxembourg]

Liking the chords!