So I'm starting to get a handle on Ableton and just finished this track. I was wondering if you guys wouldn't mind giving me a little feedback on it. Technical or compositional criticisms are more than welcome.
http://soundcloud.com/rlw-1/order
Just wrapped up working on this for the night...
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telecatster
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Re: Just wrapped up working on this for the night...
It sounds pretty good, man.
Although it gets a little repetitive, wich is nog bad, but it could do with some piano or some rhodes or whatever. And the kick at around 2:30 feels a little out of place. Maybe dry it up a bit or just adjust the settings for the kick. Other than that i really love the steady beat the soundeffects and the little melody you put in there. I'd really like to hear more from you.
Although it gets a little repetitive, wich is nog bad, but it could do with some piano or some rhodes or whatever. And the kick at around 2:30 feels a little out of place. Maybe dry it up a bit or just adjust the settings for the kick. Other than that i really love the steady beat the soundeffects and the little melody you put in there. I'd really like to hear more from you.
Re: Just wrapped up working on this for the night...
Welcome Telecaster. I know you're just starting out and I hope you got you Midi issues resloved. This is not bad for your first track. Come here and other forums that post for your genre and compare the sound with yours as a reference. As you do you will pick up more and more info on mixing and arranging your tracks to a be more polished. Take your time and keep at it. You will improve. Thanks for sharing.
Terrence Lennon
