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Just posted my first 2 songs! Electro n house. feedback plz!

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 3:21 am
by lahostia
Hey guys I've been using this forum for a while now, but have yet to make a post. After many hours I've actually completed 2 songs. Let me know what you think. Feedback would be appreciated.
http://soundcloud.com/benwitt

ben

Re: Just posted my first 2 songs! Electro n house. feedback plz!

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 5:24 am
by T-Train
Those tunes did indeed get my head bouncin'! Nitrogen reminded me of the soundtrack to a real intense scene in an 80's cop or action movie or something. Made me wanna bounce around. The buildup was sweet(the first one, I mean. They were both good but that was the one I was referring to) and I liked the change right after the buildup into that higher up synthy thing.

We go up was really relaxing. Had a nice airy, uplifting (as the title suggests) feel to it. That morphing bleep synth was just sweet sweet sweet. The percussion was on point too. Good stuff man! Keep writin' them bangas!

Re: Just posted my first 2 songs! Electro n house. feedback plz!

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 3:57 pm
by lahostia
just put 2 and 2 together. i was listening to the music of people following me and really liked your stuff. didnt realize until now that you commented on this post..ha. i guess you obviously use ableton.

Re: Just posted my first 2 songs! Electro n house. feedback plz!

Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:49 am
by som
Good stuff. It only lacks a good mastering right now.

Re: Just posted my first 2 songs! Electro n house. feedback plz!

Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 2:24 pm
by lahostia
som wrote:Good stuff. It only lacks a good mastering right now.
I agree. have any good resources for learning mastering techniques? For me that's a lot harder than actually making the music...getting it to sound clean and crisp.

Re: Just posted my first 2 songs! Electro n house. feedback plz!

Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 2:43 pm
by som
Maybe you can find some good books around. I've used http://www.amazon.de/Mastern-wie-die-Pr ... 118&sr=8-8 but is a german book.

Re: Just posted my first 2 songs! Electro n house. feedback plz!

Posted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 1:31 pm
by amigo
I agree with what has already been said. Very nice tracks but the overall sound lets them down a bit.

Thanks for sharing.

Re: Just posted my first 2 songs! Electro n house. feedback plz!

Posted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 5:29 pm
by lahostia
is it just a matter of changing the volume levels of each track? I would really appreciate some direction on goin about this in ableton.

Re: Just posted my first 2 songs! Electro n house. feedback plz!

Posted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:03 pm
by som
Changing the volume is not enough, you must change the dynamics and almost always it needs some equing, stereo widening and so on. Maszrting is not a secret vut it needs some understanding of the tools. You can start by dropping the "Mastering Rack 1" from the Audio Effects Rack if Ableton on your master channel. Just rotate the dials and listen...

Re: Just posted my first 2 songs! Electro n house. feedback plz!

Posted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 10:13 am
by jonsloan
They're both really sweet arrangements. Like the overall blend of sounds.
Just adding to what the others have said, they both need a good mix now to sort out balancing the different sounds. Some of the drum hits on the first track are popping out too much and could be tweaked. I like the raspy bass though.