My Brain says go to school. My Heart says Make Music...

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ColorationLive
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My Brain says go to school. My Heart says Make Music...

Post by ColorationLive » Fri Jun 25, 2010 2:00 am

so instead of going to class, i put together this track:


http://soundcloud.com/coloration/cunxions


I think you'll like it, lookin for feedback as always!!


...what was i gonna learn in class, anyways?

...way better use of my time, right?

thanks!

jharling
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Re: My Brain says go to school. My Heart says Make Music...

Post by jharling » Fri Jun 25, 2010 5:50 am

I like the section from 1:30 to like 2 mins. The first minute though was a bit repetitive. Try to go back and add SFX or stabs or samples, really just anything that adds a bit of variety. Overall though sounding good. :mrgreen:

ColorationLive
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Re: My Brain says go to school. My Heart says Make Music...

Post by ColorationLive » Fri Jun 25, 2010 6:42 am

thanks jharling. i tried listening to your track but the soundcloud page could not be found. maybe just not up quite yet? i'll check again tomorrow. i'll have to go back and do some more with this song since you thought it was a bit repetitive, but i'm glad you liked the overall vibe

T-Train
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Re: My Brain says go to school. My Heart says Make Music...

Post by T-Train » Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:15 am

I didn't mind the beginning, that's just me though. I dig drawn out segments sometimes...but I agree with jharling. Add some extra flavor in there to spice it up. Although I dig it now...I bet you could make it more rompin'. Either way Sick track man.

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Re: My Brain says go to school. My Heart says Make Music...

Post by amigo » Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:22 am

I like it!
I think there is a slight frequency clash between the opening bass sound and your kick drum.
The kick drum has a very powerful sound and personally I would use something with a lot less bass and more punch. But that's just my personal oinion of course. :)

Nice build up and drop at 03:50.

Thanks for sharing.

ColorationLive
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Re: My Brain says go to school. My Heart says Make Music...

Post by ColorationLive » Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:22 pm

thanks guys, gals. Since ya'll were cool enough to peep my tracks, i'll make sure to do the same for you. Anyways i take all the feedback to heart so i'll keep tryin to improve. Thanks again for the listen!

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