noob looking for feedback

[fawl]

hi i'm new to the forum and relatively new to music production. keen to get some feedback so please listen to my music and follow me on soundcloud so all my work doesn't go unheard. cheers

http://soundcloud.com/fawl-1

[Jay sway]

love the chill style of it bro good work. i wish it was longer

[fawl]

thanks mate. it's really useful to hear what other people think of my music. all of my friends are into indie rock so asking them to comment on a piece of electronic music is like asking a vegetarian to rate a meat pie. it is a work in progress at the moment. i just wanted to get some feedback so i don't waste my time working on a crap tune. thanks again

[Phantasus]

Hi

If you want to know how a real noob sounds, just go to my soundcloud-account.
Your track is great. For me, everything just fits perfectly: the bass, drums, lead.
So, in my opinion, you're not wasting any time. Keep it going, and: make the track longer! It's worth it..

Greez,
Phantasus