Something fresh - Work in Progress

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Please do listen - opinions welcome - very early stage, this:

http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon/s-2EeRE

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Just updated:

http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon/s-2EeRE

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I liked it quite a bit but I found the drums/percs borderline distracting in that they seemed a bit too complicated and too dominant. It sort of took away from the chill-out factor a bit for me. I think if you toned them down a bit it would be a nice chill tune and I would listen to it late at night on my mp3 player in bed.

funken, thanks for the input!
encym

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There's a new version up:

http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon/s-2EeRE

[102455]

I missed the one that funken heard, but after reading his comment I think that the bass drum is still too "in yer face" for an ambient piece.

IMO it's too "clicky". I would suggest using a bass drum that's deeper and softer (more muffled with less attack).

In descriptive words, it needs to sound more "woom" than "tick".

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I missed the one that funken heard, but after reading his comment I think that the bass drum is still too "in yer face" for an ambient piece.

IMO it's too "clicky". I would suggest using a bass drum that's deeper and softer (more muffled with less attack).

In descriptive words, it needs to sound more "woom" than "tick".

Thanks for the input 102455!
I've changed some things around now, so do take a listen.
Cheers!

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I liked it quite a bit but I found the drums/percs borderline distracting in that they seemed a bit too complicated and too dominant. It sort of took away from the chill-out factor a bit for me. I think if you toned them down a bit it would be a nice chill tune and I would listen to it late at night on my mp3 player in bed.

Done some more work on it; check it out: http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon

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I missed the one that funken heard, but after reading his comment I think that the bass drum is still too "in yer face" for an ambient piece.

IMO it's too "clicky". I would suggest using a bass drum that's deeper and softer (more muffled with less attack).

In descriptive words, it needs to sound more "woom" than "tick".

Finalised; have a listen: http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon

[102455]

That section from 33s kept reminding me of something, then I figured it out!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4X4qCzQrl0I

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That section from 33s kept reminding me of something, then I figured it out!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4X4qCzQrl0I

Yeah, I used to be a fan of Living Colour! Nice one.
Vague resemblance, well spotted!

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Yeah, that sounds just right now, nice one!

Changed alot again - see what you think: http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon

[Dj Mack]

If anyone would like to do remix feel free to contact me.
Please check out our video: http://youtu.be/kq8fCuHIwo4


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Another change:

http://soundcloud.com/encym/kensal-fall

[merges]

Nice work, I'm impressed by the evolution. (is the most recent track really from the first one you posted?)

There is a really pleasant cohesion in the processing of all the sounds in the last bit of the track. The same kinds of soft edges, even with the gating effects, etc. Nice work!

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Nice work, I'm impressed by the evolution. (is the most recent track really from the first one you posted?)

There is a really pleasant cohesion in the processing of all the sounds in the last bit of the track. The same kinds of soft edges, even with the gating effects, etc. Nice work!

Thanks for the kind words! And you're right, it's a different tune. Sorry!