Hello people,
I'm really new to music production and this is my second kind of track. I'm really looking for feedback, criticism and reviews!
If you could provide me some.. Would be awesome!
Here's the link
https://soundcloud.com/smallestmountain/murmurous
( PS : You can find my first track there as well!)
Thanks!
Second track I made, Kinda Organic techno?
Second track I made, Kinda Organic techno?
https://soundcloud.com/smallestmountain
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Re: Second track I made, Kinda Organic techno?
Very nice, murmurous indeed. You are good at getting the most out of few elements, and they develop slowly and nicely. I would play this in a set.
I would think about that intro in the first 10 seconds. Perhaps find something a little bit different from the rest of the track.
And about 4 minutes in, see if you can find another variation on the basic groove - perhaps something a little bit more assertive. It seems to be pretty much the same as the section that starts at 2:30
I would think about that intro in the first 10 seconds. Perhaps find something a little bit different from the rest of the track.
And about 4 minutes in, see if you can find another variation on the basic groove - perhaps something a little bit more assertive. It seems to be pretty much the same as the section that starts at 2:30