First time producing Techno / Trance - Feedback welcome

[jujuonthebeat]

Just picked up Ableton over the quarantine. Looking for ways to improve, any feedback?

https://soundcloud.com/juliettelim/second-wave-rave

[Wrigs21]

Following a similar journey So no way qualified to give any real feedback. Like it. It would be worth extending it out however to give more of a build up into the track. Worth copying some tracks that you like in terms of structure