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Posted: **Thu Aug 29, 2024 11:57 am**

This is a bit scary but f*ck it haha

This song is the result of what happens when you lay a single finger on a touch-deprived person, they go write about how life-changing it was

Also, this song would not exist if it wasn't for Half Waif's poetry to melody One Thing video! What a cool songwriting trick. Anyways, please check out my song 'An Ode To: Closeness'. I would absolutely LOVE some feedback outside of my 5 friends haha.

https://soundcloud.com/bakiart/an-ode-t ... al_sharing

Posted: **Thu Aug 29, 2024 5:43 pm**

Just realised I misspelled Electronic haha

Posted: **Fri Aug 30, 2024 3:06 am**

I'm no professional so as a lay-person, this was really nice to listen to. I liked the vocals a lot and the overall vibe of the mix is super chill and very cinematic! Could certainly be in an intimate scene in a movie or series

I just wish at around 1:47 the track crescendoed with harder beats as sort of a climactic end to the track but that's a very personal and subjective take on this which I guess is good because that means I liked it enough to think about other ways to produce it

Giving you a follow on SC.

Cheers,

Posted: **Fri Aug 30, 2024 5:14 pm**

noizfactory wrote: ↑
Fri Aug 30, 2024 3:06 am
I'm no professional so as a lay-person, this was really nice to listen to. I liked the vocals a lot and the overall vibe of the mix is super chill and very cinematic! Could certainly be in an intimate scene in a movie or series I just wish at around 1:47 the track crescendoed with harder beats as sort of a climactic end to the track but that's a very personal and subjective take on this which I guess is good because that means I liked it enough to think about other ways to produce it Giving you a follow on SC.

Cheers,

OMG thank you for the kind words!!! Expect a follow back

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