I couldn't imagine Dan's reaction to hearing himself like that, I'm sure he loved it.
Cool track, maybe too thin(?), I dunno, styles of dub range from sparse to insanely busy. The pads towards the end help this. The bell sound is a bit hot.
One of the drum hits is too short, it sounds more like a snat, it's a snare that hits on the 2 + 4.
Damn, very very cool especially for your first try, congrats!!