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You need to make a sweep or something to let the synth at 0:15 come in more fluently. Kick could use some toughening up. The snare you used has a very unique distinct sound, great job. You could try to play a bit with the cutoff/resonance of the synth in the intro to make it a bit more interesting ...

Hello all,

Check out the latest finished version of my track 'Strike'. It's a deep & dark minimal/techno track. You can find the track here:

http://soundcloud.com/sanderbongertman/ ... iginal-mix

Enjoy!

Great idea, I'm all for it, just joined your group.

Well you should make a full version of that track, sound awesome mate!

Ah, now I see what you mean well any feedback is much appreciated so thanks a lot! Do you have tracks as well on soundcloud or something? cheers

thanks for checking it out!

I might have to take another look at the percussive synth indeed, sounds a bit loud. What exactly do you mean with don't care for the snare hehe?

second version is online now at the same link!

Break is already much better. You still need to work on a good intro instead of just throwing everything in there from the start

This can turn out to be a pretty nice remix. Like where you're going so far! I left some suggestions in the timed bar on soundcloud
cheers

Ok, it's kinda hard to try and 'fix' your track without having controls but i'll give it a try ;)
The vocal that starts at the beginning could use a little bit of reverb to make it sound deeper richer and less plain. The toms that come in then either need a rise in gain or you need to EQ them ...

Hello all, finished on the first version of a new tech-house track today, please tell me what you think!

http://soundcloud.com/sanderbongertman/ ... iginal-mix

Regards,

Sander

Sounds pretty interesting, nice combination of sounds. Will give it a thorough listen tomorrow when at my studio with some monitors. Can't hear shit now with my earbuds lol.

thanks! you're right on the sterile sounds, have to make a decent synth to overlay the rest of the track and then i'm going to work on the arrangement. as always, thanks for the feedback!

The track 'Phlopp' has an amazing relaxing atmosphere, well done!