Ambient/IDM, need criticism!

[Effulgence]

Hey fellow producers, I've been working hard on this track and finally finished it this morning. This is my first attempt at IDM and I also tried to mix some elements of Ambient atmospheres in there. I would love to hear what you guys think about this as any feedback/or criticism would be greatly appreciated. Thank you and take care
http://soundcloud.com/effulgence/quantum-entanglement

[FORMAT]

Like it! Good beat programming and atmospheres.

[Simon Waters]

Heyup - good work there. The subtle reverb gives it a clear and punchy feel. If I was gonna be picky I'd say that the piano playing is dominated by crotchet and quavers notes which gives it a slightly mechanical feel... try runs of triplets and semiquavers to give feel.

2p please.

Simon

[beetles]

Nice chilled track.Would be perfect in a movie soundtrack.