Still sounds a little break beat'ish to me... which isn't a bad thing...
You did add more bass... but in a bass/kick drum sort of way...
May I suggest... if you can... try and squeeze a bass sound that is almost a 1/2 measure... so 2 per measure... as a start try and get something that goes kind of 'whum'... like a quick attack, but you can still feel the filter coming in to strangle out the highs... I guess that is the best way I can state it... tomorrow... (when I'm at work and have more time heh) maybe I'll try and come up with an operator patch to get the idea acrossed.
One of the things I've at least found with trance is that the bass line is *nearly* the same note... very driving... and entirely predictable. You should be able to set your watch to it. While it isn't a hard and fast rule... it seems like when you strip everything else away, people should still "feel" the song from the bass line, which is why you often hear a song build up to the baseline, but in techno (or at least the stuff I listen to) it'll usually there after be hanging around pounding away and not getting tired...
Of course I should listen to the song on some proper speakers as the tiny speaker on my laptop is certainly not doing it justice... but I would've thought I'd at least get an impression of it...
