Hi!
I'm working on some songs these days, and I want to try to send a demo to some labels when they're done. Because if you never try, you'll never know
But I'm not sure which song to send. I have listened to them so much during the prossess that I'm a little biased now. So I would love to get some feedback on which song you think I should send?
I have nine songs at the moment, but the two I've listed below are the ones I think are the best candidates. Some of my other songs are darker and longer, that's why I chose these.
Candidate 1: «Gold & Nuggets»
https://soundcloud.com/christinduck/goldandnuggets
Candidate 2: «The Machine»
https://soundcloud.com/christinduck/themachine
Thank you for your attention!
Which of these two songs are best suited as a demo song?
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Re: Which of these two songs are best suited as a demo song?
You should probably practice producing for a while more before pursuing a commercial music career, these do not sound release ready - even though the ideas are very solid.
The Machine is really, really cool! The production just isn't there yet.
The Machine is really, really cool! The production just isn't there yet.
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Re: Which of these two songs are best suited as a demo song?
Thank you! You're right, I will still work on them to make the production bettertobiassf wrote:You should probably practice producing for a while more before pursuing a commercial music career, these do not sound release ready - even though the ideas are very solid.
The Machine is really, really cool! The production just isn't there yet.
If anyone has some tips on how to make the tracks sound more professional, I'll be happy to know.
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Re: Which of these two songs are best suited as a demo song?
I like The Machine a lot. The two obvious improvements needed are a clearer snare and a clearer vocal. I'm not sure what the genre requirements are, but I can imagine a nice smooth female vocal going over the top of some sections.
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Re: Which of these two songs are best suited as a demo song?
Thank you! I like mostly instrumental songs, but I'm working on the snare and beat now. In general I would like a little clearer sound, but it's not easyMartin Gifford wrote:I like The Machine a lot. The two obvious improvements needed are a clearer snare and a clearer vocal. I'm not sure what the genre requirements are, but I can imagine a nice smooth female vocal going over the top of some sections.